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Sunday, May 12, 2013

Demon and Fairy WeWriWar 1


    Today is my first participation to the Week-end Writing Warriors. I'm really excited about it and I hope that I will be able to keep up on time. I decided that my first project would be to contribute by giving excerpt of "Demon and Fairy". I have been working on this novel for months now. I was planing to release it in June last year but I wasn't totally satisfied so I didn't. Now I'm hoping to have it ready by the end of next month and I hope that the Week-end Writing Warriors project is going to help me with that.

Demon and fairy is the story of Seti, a demon of Chaos who can't touch anyone without disintegrated them and Kallisto, a princess fairy raised in the Human World who have to go back to the Fairy World to get married. She seems to be the only one able to take away his pain with her music as he is looking at her from a portal between the Human World and the Demon World.
Here are the 8 sentences introducing the novel. 


        Seti was flying to the beach, his head hurting like hell and the pain blurring his vision. 
He was holding his head with both hands making it difficult to keep balance and to fly straight. 
The voice of Chaos in his head was asking for more fights. 
He knew he shouldn’t have given into it in the first place but it was too late to think about it now. 
The Chaos was asking for more chaos, always, and it was getting worse every day, except, when she was there.
He had discovered her by accident. 
Who could have thought that such a passage existed? 
He had been fighting again. 


If you are interested, you can read more about Demon and Fairy here
Discover the excerpts of other participants through the Week-end Writing Warriors's blog here
Facebook Snippet Sunday group for more posts here
 

17 comments:

  1. Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors! Nice first installment. Intriguing.

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  2. Hello and welcome! Glad to have you participating! This is a great excerpt you've shared. Interested to read more! :)

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  3. Hi, it's wonderful to have you at Weekend Writing Warriors.

    This is a strong story opener, and I'm definitely interested in why Seti's in pain.

    Your blog mascot is super adorable1

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  4. Nice to meet you and welcome to WeWriWa! :-) Sounds like an interesting story.

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  5. Well poor Seti has my sympathy already, for sure! Interesting snippet!

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  6. Interesting concept. Welcome to WeWriWa. :)

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  7. yes welcome - a fantastic group. Your concept intrigues me

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  8. Good intro and nice story premise! There might be a bit of a verb tense issue. How does "remain balanced and fly straight" sound?

    We are so glad to have you here at Weekend Writing Warriors! Please visit other participants and comment, ask questions, and offer advice. That's what it's all about--writers helping writers. :-)

    See you next Sunday. :-)

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  9. Interesting first installment as someone already mentioned. =) Looking to reading more.

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  10. I like the premise of your novel.

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  11. Welcome to WeWriWa and Snippet Sunday on Facebook (I found you there--I haven't yet visited WeWriWa). Looking forward to reading more from you.

    Did you do the artwork on your blog? I love it!

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  12. Welcome! I'm looking forward to reading more from you in the upcoming weeks.

    Did you do the art work on your blog? I love it!

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  13. Welcome to WWW and Snippet Sunday! (I do both.) This is a good opening snippet that sets up your story well.

    ~Joyce Scarbrough

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  14. Interesting premise. Welcome to WeWriWa.

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  15. What an interesting twist. Instead of angels and demons, you have demons and fairies. I'd like to see how their different mythologies interact.

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  16. Thank you everyone for the warm welcome.
    I was really surprised to see all the comments. I wanted to return the favor and hope I didn't miss anyone.
    There are so many talented writer in this group, I feel proud and happy to be part of it.

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  17. What a vibrant blog..

    You have kicked off with something great and I shall be looking out for more..x

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